Sunday, September 20, 2015

Summer Offers Sun Comments

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Blades of straw are still lying leveled
On the ground, left by our worried body,
Blowing crimson dust of twilight, we move
Playing broken harp of forgotten melody.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 22 September 2015

Verily, the summer season teaches man to have patience and endure

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 September 2015

Heart has learnt how to burn soft desire. ask the night To sing lullaby of sweet monsoon day. i like these lines in your poem. lovely one. thank you dear Poetess

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2015

And sweet dreams will come to relive the travel-pains.......WIth you miles to go will be tiles crossed.....Loved it, great imagery, very descriptive poetry.

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