Summer Night Comments
I wish my love for a summer night
For twinkling stars and the moon so bright
sweet smelling flowers and open sky
And no one around just you and I
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The first Octave is tremendous, rhymed well in a well knitted couplets, beautifully glides from the 3rd person to a lucky first person I... but the lost couplet didn't set well... Summer night, starry sky, flower fragrance and a silky warm touch, ohhh what love wants more... Neee volumes to appreciate....
A good start with a nice poem, Shah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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7/29/2025 10:21:19 AM # 1.0.0
A fine write with the thoughts of love.... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila