Thursday, April 1, 2021

Summer ~ Hot Air. Comments

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Hot are the cock and the bull that mutters on the land
Hotter the chillies that grow on black soil,
And hot air balloon that fly in all weather
Taking the moods high up in the sky.
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 03 April 2021

Very hot poem for humans.

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Chris Beasley 02 April 2021

A balloon full of hot air sees all.

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Anjandev Roy 02 April 2021

Fantastic piece.....thank u, dear friend.

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Captain Cur 01 April 2021

A great metaphorical write! I would imagine one could also argue, some humans are full of hot air, politicians et al! It can also be argued humans are tempered by certain conditions!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 April 2021

Wonderful simple wonderful! Bravo! Please read and comment on my poem The Meadow Thanks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2021

A lovely and perceptive poem. Well expressed write. Great poetic expressions.

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