Summer Holidays Relax Days Time Spent Free Poem by Terence George Craddock

Summer Holidays Relax Days Time Spent Free

Rating: 5.0


the sun should be summer shinning soon
ending darkness rainy winter days of gloom
the sun should be summer shinning soon
ending cold chilly windy days in dark gloom
the sun should be summer shinning soon
fine days warm days hot hot hot till noon
then a cooling breeze coming in from the sea
warm days happy days swimming in the sea

holidays goof off days how happy we will be
summer holidays relax days time spent free
a few days relaxation dedicated happy days
a few days leisure dedicated definitely days
a few days great expectation days next month
the summer won't wait the summer won't last

Saturday, November 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: free,holidays,summer,summer time ,sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in November 2020 on the 29.11.2020.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 29 November 2020

Wonderfully optimistic poem, Terence! Reminds me of the songs of The Rascals and The Loving Spoonful. Love it!

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Terry Craddock 30 November 2020

Hi Richard, thank you for the review. I was not familiar with songs by either that I am aware of, I tried to look up a few songs with limited success. But I listened to several songs that might be close. It was interesting. Do you have any of the song titles, if so I will listen to the originals?

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