Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Summer Haiku Comments

Rating: 3.8

(Dedicated to neat poet Catrina Heart)

1. Summer dragon runs
Upon the plant and animal
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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10++ one of the best haikus I've ever read

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 June 2009

all but lovely summer haiku.. sweet... beautiful summer built beautifully love dwells in every lines.. 10+++ _maia_

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Gargi Saha 24 May 2009

A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

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Yannis Voultos 18 May 2009

Great!

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Lateef Jan Afridi 17 May 2009

lovely write, i like the way you write dear, carry on

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Gi Galen 15 May 2009

‘ Love sprouts slowly ’ Yes, for that roots deeply starts up … Beautiful poem, aroma of the 'sky'.../10

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Obinna Eruchie 15 May 2009

those are nice haikus on summer. well done.

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Wildan F Rabbani 15 May 2009

a beautiful scene...

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Janri Gogeshvili 14 May 2009

Ambiguous poetic 'kaleidoscope' lovely. /10

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Mamta Agarwal 14 May 2009

lovely images of summer, clouds and rain. you have built it beautifully.10 Mamta

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Raquel Rebecca 13 May 2009

This one is very beautiful.

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Tshering Tobgay 13 May 2009

i would say that it is a good poem and every one of us who visits this site should make a point to visit this poem, well written, and i appreciate it.

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Indira Renganathan 13 May 2009

The last stanza is soothing in scorching summer...a different way of depicting summer...excellent

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loved them most! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Julius Babarinsa 12 May 2009

Ashraful, the Summer Haiku is a brilliant work. Never stop writing.

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dear friend, though your poems thematically seem very interesting, I would choose not to call them 'haikus' as they do not follow the traditional and stereotypical pattern in their number of syllables and the necessary inclusion of a colour choice in each. I am sorry for my negation, but I feel I must be strict if you want my sincere help

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Afzal Shauq 12 May 2009

Summer love Rain drop Sleepy grass its really a very impressive and meaningful haiko..wonderful...lovely and really heart touching one...respect your words as comments..hope we be in touched sharing words... thanks...yours

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Roland Bastien 12 May 2009

. Summer love Rain drop Sleepy grass ---------- lovely

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Obed Souza 12 May 2009

Summer love rain dropp sleepy grass! Dry soil needs rain drops.. there´s always a way out for life... Nice doing!

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ZEN POEM 12 May 2009

well done! the whole house shook during the earthquake......

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