(Dedicated to neat poet Catrina Heart)
1. Summer dragon runs
Upon the plant and animal
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all but lovely summer haiku.. sweet... beautiful summer built beautifully love dwells in every lines.. 10+++ _maia_
‘ Love sprouts slowly ’ Yes, for that roots deeply starts up … Beautiful poem, aroma of the 'sky'.../10
lovely images of summer, clouds and rain. you have built it beautifully.10 Mamta
i would say that it is a good poem and every one of us who visits this site should make a point to visit this poem, well written, and i appreciate it.
The last stanza is soothing in scorching summer...a different way of depicting summer...excellent
Ashraful, the Summer Haiku is a brilliant work. Never stop writing.
dear friend, though your poems thematically seem very interesting, I would choose not to call them 'haikus' as they do not follow the traditional and stereotypical pattern in their number of syllables and the necessary inclusion of a colour choice in each. I am sorry for my negation, but I feel I must be strict if you want my sincere help
Summer love Rain drop Sleepy grass its really a very impressive and meaningful haiko..wonderful...lovely and really heart touching one...respect your words as comments..hope we be in touched sharing words... thanks...yours
Summer love rain dropp sleepy grass! Dry soil needs rain drops.. there´s always a way out for life... Nice doing!
10++ one of the best haikus I've ever read