Monday, August 5, 2019

Summer Going, Summer Arriving Comments

Rating: 5.0

As dusk appears
The fading light comes too soon
The days are shorter than before
And summer becomes a faded flower
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

The fading light comes too soon... And summer becomes a faded flower! .. Excellent expressions! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

Wow! .. So beautifully described! .. In thought, heart and feel! .. Magnificently expressed! .. Definite! ..5 Stars! ..+++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2019

Dusk and fading light....... wonderful expressions of summer going and and coming.. very n ice nature poem and it includes your heaving and joy as a poetess. it is symbolic too. thank u. tony

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Mj Lemon 07 August 2019

I read this several times...it reminded me...the season summer fades as the season of life, the other summer, slowly advances. A great verse, LeeAnn.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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