Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Summer Girls Comments

Rating: 4.3

When the sun rise
Dont let the time flies,
dont try to ignore, dont be bore
It's time to get up our sleepy heart
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Sydne Morris 25 January 2010

Thank you for your comment on my poem with the same title! I really appreciated it! This poem has awesome imagery and voice. Good Job.

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Ency Bearis 24 September 2009

wonderful simile poem...a good vivid write for those girls with encouragement and well narrated......10

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