Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Summer Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

Warm summer loves
Return the letter in the wind
A write that forever young in heart
Remain my soul free, loved in serenity
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2018

You have so touchingly and hauntingly inscribed the summer memories from beginning to the concluding. All lines are enchanted. Let me quote some..... Standing now under the big tree Yes, the same little tree we did bury Of everyone, you and me All loves bounce warm memories My childhood sweet stories In a child of grown up body Recalled everyone, you and me Who raised me as who i am now Beautiful poem.10

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Rebecca Navarre 16 January 2018

Oh Wow! ! ! ! ! How Ever Beautifully Breath Taking! ! ! ! ! How Ever So Beautifully Heart Melting! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Touching! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Painted! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! :) Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Mj Lemon 06 January 2018

There is something about July....it seems to drag memories, desires, and passions out of us. Perhaps that's why most of my nostalgia revolves around glorious summer times. This is a wonderful poem, Soul. And it has unleashed a torrent of memories.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2017

Memorires of life. The past. Thanks for sharing.

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

a lovely summer dream indeed. summer the time of happiness playing in the sun loveing the season.

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Patricia Grantham 30 July 2013

A very nice and poignantly written piece of art Soul. Summer is a time that brings on carefree days, childhood memories, fresh picked flowers and new found love. When the days of Summer has passed we can then immerse ourselves in a Summer Dream of good memories. Enjoyed this one.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2013

The poem is long, but wish it were longer! You've carried me along with you. Still now i own Of what i dream since years Stay innocent and free Yes, stay innocent and free! Difficult take, but possible.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 July 2013

Your poem is as long as a glorious summer and as nice.

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Yasmin Khan 11 July 2013

A beautiful poem, lovely dreams and smoothly flowing rhymes like summer sky. The last lines are touching.

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Bursting with bountiful beauty. Well done!

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Nader Baheri 29 June 2013

just recommenting.i was thinking about this topic.i think the seasons are like our lives. first spring is like our childhood.everything is new and fresh and growing.the plants the trees. second SUMMER is like our teenage and adolescence.love mostly happens during this period of our lives.even this period can melt icy hearts third Autumn shows our maturity ages.and the last is winter is the end of the line. hope for all people that their summer time last for long. -~nb

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Nader Baheri 27 June 2013

i dont know why but summer really reminds me my childhood too.the days of joy and honesty.with the melted loves that each of them can start a new life.with the so many icy hearts that no longer can resist.really life starts with the summer.fabulous written with flowing words and enjoyable i love this poem.great one soul~nb

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

beautiful poetry. very inspiring.

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Elena Sandu 25 June 2013

Beautiful poem, bBeautiful memories! We ride on the air with the birds Flying in summer dream Forever green and young

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 June 2013

An excellent poem written with great inspiration and wonderful thoughts are truly alluring!

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Jenie Franksay 24 June 2013

created an image in my mind nice poem.

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Survi Sharma 24 June 2013

great flow of word a masterpiece indeed

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Autumn Winds 23 June 2013

The summer winds have come again and bring with it memories A beautiful poem -A

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Yasmin Khan 23 June 2013

A lovely composition with flow of thoughts like fluid summer air

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Dinesan Madathil 23 June 2013

Dearest Soul, At the outset I wish you all the very best to see that your dreams bounce back onto the way of realisation. Whenever we read your writes, it`s not your poem but the person and poet in you we feel at heart again and again. Amazing integrity of thoughts and powerful imagination are your traits. This poem is a feather to your cap of fine writes, dear Soul.

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