Summer Breezes In Twilight Comments
The summer breeze caresses your body in the twilight air .
Raptured heart in memories of the courtesan ladies fair .
Pleasures abound in thoughts both true and blessed of lovers entwined .
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Very beautifully romantic and magical...a ten from me...now this is a poem! ! ! ! Welcome to PoemHunter...I guess you've met the crown prince of clown poets...
Gandolph...., I'd say it was fine for what it was, very mild and romance oriented. Write a few more with some different subjects in rhyming and/or non-rhyming patterns. Regards, Trade Martin.
Nice meter, rhythm and rhyme. You show good potential here at poemhunter. Keep those poems coming.
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7/27/2025 9:28:04 AM # 1.0.0
so beautifully written. I love twilight, the velevty sky with the twinkling eyes. you have such poise and precision.