** ** **** Summer Breeze Makes Me Feel Fine. Comments

I don't likes this........ I LOVE THIS😍😍😍😍💞💞🤍🤍

Shelley, oh how I wish I could spend sometime in that garden of Eden you so brilliantly described here. The imagery enthralled me as I read along. Top marks from me and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

wow shelley, I couldn't even take a breath reading that poem, it was such a peaceful poem and full of wonderful images that take you away...I have to say I truly believed I was right there with you because of your detailed description of summer nature...very nice :)

Oh yes indeed...! Nothing better than a lazy, relaxing soak in the beauty of a summer's day. Great imagery here, Shelley - your words are powerful enough to draw one right into the sounds and smells of a beautiful (Okanagan) day! ! ! ! Keep 'em coming!

Shelley this is absolutely beautiful in every way, it captures a most beautiful summer day. Very picturesque with excellent imagry, I just love the superb flow of this peace. It has a most enjoyable feel to it, wanting you to follow it through to the end, pulling you into the poem as if walking within it's beauty. You are a very special poet who has learned how to capture the total interest of the reader. Excellent work Shelley, I'll be back for more, you can bet on it.--Melvina--

Excellent poem! I loved your imagery and your beautiful verses. I especially loved the line where you say the sun's rays make you close your eyes and dream. Top marks without a doubt! -Michael

Must agree wiht T.O. here.....absolutly splendid ride

The title sucks you in.....and take you on a splendid nature ride. Visual treat. Love...TO