Saturday, April 21, 2018

Summer Breeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

The summer breeze is at my door
Shedding  leaves across the floor
Dryness is creeping into my soul
And my heart is burning as a whole
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Rini Shibu
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 April 2018

Hi Rini, In the hot (and sultry in Kerala) , summer, a little breeze is most welcome. Lovely poem.

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Rini shibu 24 April 2018

Kerala it's very humid..thanks

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Lamar Cole 23 April 2018

This is a very enjoyable poem about summer breeze.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2018

Softly caress with your warmth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 April 2018

The summer breeze is now too hot, a moderate weather we all need. A nice poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such a well expressed lovely poem👍👍👍

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Practicing Poetess 21 April 2018

A very beautiful poem, Rini! Hopefully the Summer Breeze will heed your words, and obey, and not be harsh!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

This beautiful poem traverses the seasonal changes stylishly.

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