Sunday, July 19, 2009

Summer Blues Comments

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It rains so hard...
almost as if the dark clouds were crying for something they'd lost,
a constant wall of water reminiscent of something sad or dead
and yet, there is so much life in the water that falls from that sky,
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Marta Mehrpouyan
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Deanna Holcomb 04 February 2010

You have a wonderful gift to put to words the natural world with your feeling. A lovely poem indeed. I believe you have a new fan. Keep writing. God bless.

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Marta Mehrpouyan

Marta Mehrpouyan

Havana, Cuba
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