Summer Blooms - Haiku Comments
Fragrant summer blooms
Come in captivating crowds
Sweet butterflies dance.
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Excellent Haiku. Sweet usage of the poetry form. The third line discovers itself in most assuring way. Brilliant
Such heart touching thoughts to dream and reflect upon! ... Again such beauty beyond words that I could express! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++
Beautiful beautiful imagery with such heart moving sentiments and feel this! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
Lovely personification of blooms! Love the word 'crowd'. A succinct gem! Delightful imagery!
Exquisite imagery. And as Bill Cantrell has observed, it also works when you read it backwards. In fact, remarkably well. Was that your intention, Rose Marie?
Thank you, Richard. No, it was not my intention. I haven't noticed it until you and Bill mentioned in your comments.
Beautiful lines of poetry, a wonderful creation.... Thanks for sharing, Rose. Stay blessed.
Just right for the last Summer days. Truly enchanting and sweet.
Very nice, I also works when you read it backwards, very creative and elegant
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7/26/2025 10:12:25 PM # 1.0.0
A whole field of flowers with a sweet smell attracting even butterflies!