Saturday, June 16, 2018

Summer Annoyance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken sprinklers
Mosquito bites and
Uncontrollable itch
Summer's offering
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 02 July 2018

YIKES! time to STAY INDOORS! ? bri ;)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 June 2018

Clumsy indeed but some fruits may be on the way. Nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2018

Summer evening is beautifully captured in mind and presented in this poem. This reflects reality behind perception. Hot summer affects skin giving cracking and burning effect. Many mosquito gather and fly at evening time and they bite. This poem is brilliantly, metaphorical and humorously penned...10

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