Broken sprinklers
Mosquito bites and
Uncontrollable itch
Summer's offering
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Clumsy indeed but some fruits may be on the way. Nice poem.
Summer evening is beautifully captured in mind and presented in this poem. This reflects reality behind perception. Hot summer affects skin giving cracking and burning effect. Many mosquito gather and fly at evening time and they bite. This poem is brilliantly, metaphorical and humorously penned...10
YIKES! time to STAY INDOORS! ? bri ;)