Summer Afternoon Comments
I watched as swans went gliding by,
Gazing at gracefulness so sleek,
Then spied a dancing dragonfly,
Displaying its beauty, so unique.
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echoes of John Clare in the clarity of sentiment and beautiful wordplay. Another excellent write, Ernestine.
Such a gentle, peaceful read, Ernestine. What a lovely poem to end my day with. Ahhh............. Love, Fran xx
The rhyming of odd lines, then the even ones is not done much anymore. Nice technique. Maybe I'll have some fowl for lunch today. You stirred my appetite. (smile!)
Your depictions are so wonderful... the imagery is just so beautiful..... loved every step of the poem.... great writings....
Beautiful, Ernestine. It pulled me in visually and mentally to a wonderful summer afternoon beside your creek. Calm, relaxed my heart serene. Thank you. Diane
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7/28/2025 10:34:12 AM # 1.0.0
Dear Ernestine This, as with so many of your amazing writes, would be enough to grace any shelf with dignity and style so much to be admired here, so much! ! Love duncan X