Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Summer Afternoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer afternoon is still hot
Sun moves in blue sky
Stinging and biting the earth
Silence drifts in and out of mild breeze
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Savita Tyagi
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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2014

A lovely description of weather in a hot day and even the afternoon.

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Valsa George 13 November 2013

The cool mornings slip away too soon and we begin to feel the scorching heat of the sun. The hot summer afternoons are so weary, draining all energy away. We get a little relief at times when massive clouds come and veil the flaming sun! A great write! !

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On such hot dreamy afternoons Time often stands still for the muse Between the harsh light and dark shadows Verses are born that you could make use Good poem Madam and I welcome you to my page for your comments please....

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Ittrika Pandit 29 September 2013

~ Last few drops of humidity, hidden away from summer showered on my soul...

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