Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Summer Comments

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Here comes the summer
With the sunlight giving freshness.
My mouth waters for the melting icecreams
To make this summer happy.
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KEERTHANA DINESH 1998
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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 March 2008

One will enjoy the shade, only when he or she goes out in the hot sun. This poem proves this.

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Mini Dinesh 13 March 2008

For your age it`s a good poem.Well done!

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KEERTHANA DINESH 1998

KEERTHANA DINESH 1998

Vijayawada, India
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