That heat drenched summer
Long passed now,
That summer
How we loved lying on the lazy sand.
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This was the year I was born Mike, your poem flows and the imagery is wonderful, well worth a ten from me, best wishes Lynda x
This is absolutely gorgeous, how you relived your moments of passion in this poem is superb (I imagine this is only the half of it) . The setting and imagery really come to life in this eloquent offering. HG: -) xx