Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Summer 1952 Comments

Rating: 5.0

That heat drenched summer
Long passed now,
That summer
How we loved lying on the lazy sand.
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Mike Tonkin
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Original Unknown Girl 21 June 2007

This is absolutely gorgeous, how you relived your moments of passion in this poem is superb (I imagine this is only the half of it) . The setting and imagery really come to life in this eloquent offering. HG: -) xx

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Lynda Robson 12 June 2007

This was the year I was born Mike, your poem flows and the imagery is wonderful, well worth a ten from me, best wishes Lynda x

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