Saturday, October 13, 2018

Sum Of My Parts Comments

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The steely look from the crowd, barely
changes my decision.

The cries from somewhere beneath, remind me
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Jeremy Horsford
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 October 2018

My fingers bleed, tunnelling for an ideology once believed, once a truth, now a myth... figurative way of expressing..... all of us have this experience but u have made it a fine poem by saying we are tunnelling and our fingers are bleeding.. thank u for the words uttered which made me think a lot. thank u.. tony

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