Sultry Red Beauty Comments

Eni...I love the direction that this one took. You've told a whole story in just a few lines...and done an excellent job! I reader wants to reach out and smack the guy! ! The use of the word 'red' and 'beautiful', all throughout was just that...beautiful...very clever! ! Awesome write...I'm putting it in my faves! Hugs, Dee

*in shock* definitely a favorite. Probably had something to do with the fact that 'beautiful' is my favorite word... HMM! the ending was phenomenal! ! YOU'RE SO TALENTEDDDDD! ! ! gabriela

Love the ending, really cool poem.

I thought this was very clever, quite chic in that urban sort of way. I like the consistent use of red to show whatever feelings were there, passion, fear excitement. Well done.