Friday, August 1, 2008

Suits Comments

Rating: 4.7

Minds cloaked in grey
They wander the battlefield
Weilding their blades
Of nonchalance, the battle lost.
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Martin O'Neill
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Gone Away 16 March 2010

I agree....vultures in polycotton is a great line in a well observed and intelligent poem.

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Jacqui Thewless 13 July 2009

I agree with Susan Jarvis on this one.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 12 January 2009

Hard hitting and intense

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Ian Bowen 12 August 2008

Martin, some great lines in your very readable poem.10 Ian

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Susan Jarvis 01 August 2008

A superb analogy - 'Vulture necks in polycotton' is a magnificent line. S :)

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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