Suicide Trees Comments

=) my black coffee tasted not as bitter as usual as i read on this piece.. keep on brewing.

I never thought it was too long, I thought it was excellent, you have a real talent at making the feelings and thoughts flow. I feel for you in a way that most poets don't make me feel. You captivate me with the rhythm of the words and ideas, the feelings and concepts. Most stuff on here is so slow, and dull and everyone is trying too hard to write something perfectly insightful. You write about what you know, and you do it really well.

today your name is pain... that has alot of positivity to it if you really think about it, because your saying your name isnt pain everyday, just today. :) it is very creative and extremely clever, but i didnt read all of it as i think its too long! read my poems see what u think. Thanx :)