Suicide Suspect Comments

Very well written, just remember Tiff, your at an age where your hormones are all mixed up but you are in a great place to rhyme out your feelings and that is done so beautifully

Well the peeps below me have their oppinions and sh*t of wut you should do lik um 'please don't feel that way' yah idk if you like wut they say but i dont... The poems are to express yourself they ARE some people's healing process my friends dont understand me so i come vent here. If i am right that's wut your doing? ? ? Plus showing off your mad writing skillz Great poem as always :)

Great poem, but please don't feel that way. I know how horrid it is to feel such pains. It feels unbareable and keeps pushing you closer to a breaking point. I hate it and I hope you overcome this feeling. I loved the poem because I can compare it to myself in a lot of ways, but remember it's our emotions and things that happen that usually make us write and maybe one day make you famous... Keep it up... Yours Truly, Rivs

living in pain is one of the worst things to come you should start the healing process good poem though

oh hun.. hope ur pain will heal soon lol.. nicely written luv it, , keep on the gr8 work, ,