Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Suicide(Saddest Tail Ever Told) Comments

Rating: 3.9

They say before you commit suicide, you should reflect back on your life ride
so i lie hear as i start to cry tears, thinking back to my fears, forget thinking i'd rather just die here
but before i take eternal rest, i sit down at my desk, and write a fresh, good-bye letter, saying how i wish my life was better
i read back to my self what i wrote, about how i wanna croque, ive always been good at writing sad notes, i sketched a smiley face on it as an ironic joke
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Rebekah Strunk 27 April 2010

This was an amazing poem. You captured what people go through when they want to kill themselves. I love this poem.

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ellie carpenter 26 April 2010

sad poem. almost cry.X( i really like it keep it up.

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Ying Escalona 19 April 2010

this is really a sad tale....nice piece

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loNeLY AnGel 18 April 2010

sniff sniff i love this poem

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Josh Schultz 15 April 2010

i really like it............

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