When life seems all hopeless
still don't yah loose all scope of hope
for there's this thing dangling in the air
Reach out for God's sturdy rope.
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For those committing suicide, Before you jump from way up high, Before you take that final dive, You denude yourself of human pride;
For how sure can you be that death will take you to a better fate? What if you are plunged into a plight much worse where there's no turning back at any rate! keep it up ;)
This poem is a social service on your part, and a very substantial contribution to the society...
great great message and motivation for those who have lost hope wonderful work grea work :)
I relish this poem much for the beauty of the message it carries and the masterly way it is written!
Love this very positive take on life. It not only warns against a destructive trend, but also offers an alternative - God. May it touch and save many lives by helping to steer them in the right direction. A wonderful poem.
Great truths in this poem. Most people who commit suicide perhaps do so in a rage of (temporary) insanity. The values and purposes that one holds may be very important. Excellent poem.
A really embracing read, I have face moods where I have felt desperate, but not enough to do myself in, a positive ray, of looking forward to life.
Suicide is for weak people who are not able to face up with the life's problems and things in it's case you wrote this poem in a great and nice way well done.
Well, I disagree. I don't have enough courage to commit suicide. But it's better than living with sorrow and pain in the world of suffer. Anyway, I guess you read Shakespeare's Hamlet, and if you didn't, you would like reading it. Specially the part that says: To be or not to be, this is the question. Because your ideas are exactly the same with him. Good luck.
Beautiful. You are a Sufi. The only way out is to hold Allah's rope. Estatic or depressed this is there for all. Lovely. Bebo blessed.
Well, it's your mind that tricks you in believin And it's your heart that tricks u into stayin... And it's probable that all those years that you now... have something bright ahead (also on here still!) And like me, some will stay wait.
A beautiful poem of advice.May the Almighty bless you.
That's really well said. I think faith gives you a solid overall view of life. As you say, YOU HAVEN'T RIGHT TO BRING ANY LIFE TO ITS END. There are rich implications in this statement. We were put into this world by a power beyond fathoming, for purposes we do not fully understand, so we cannot set ourselves up as judges over life.