Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Suicide Poem Comments

Rating: 3.5

standing here looking at the floor
i think i took too much
i lift my head to look out the door
but, i can feel myself slippin from life's clutch
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shaun znideric
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Brian Weisberg 24 March 2009

lol i hope your not going to do this; -) I care man, I care

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Ibrar Siddiqi 24 March 2009

Shaun, I could imagine you beating some heavy, metal riffs to this - Metallica style - such a good poem - i closed my eyes after and imagine a short film - you got talent kep it up. Ibrar

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