Monday, February 4, 2019

Suicide Of Impotent Love Comments

Rating: 4.3

beloved has run away on love trip;
lover killed himself for the love in grief;
lustfully this love was
dead alive for nine years;
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Valsa George 04 February 2019

Lustful love is not real love! The man shouldn't have committed suicide! Unfortunately he wasted his life on a love that seemed alive, but was dead in spirit! Infidelity in love is often heartbreaking for one who keeps the sanctity of love! We can learn valuable life lessons from this poem!

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Jankovic Zoran 04 February 2019

LUSTFUL LOVE CAN LIVE TOGETHER BUT CAN NOT LIVE LONG! Great deep truth.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2019

No matter the conditions, suicide is not the answer! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2019

Profound poem...... Yes you said it, No one can take it for long.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 February 2019

A beautiful poem dear friend.....I relish the expression rendered in unique style......10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2019

i like ur satire you burn everyone's fire and at times my desire lovely poem urs entire

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Akhtar Jawad 04 February 2019

Funny but a lot of seriousness in it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2019

lover killed himself for the love in grief...... this usage dead alive is very important in this poem.... dear Mahtab. love your poem as always. tony

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