I'm a man treated like a boy
I have no life and no love
I am filled with no joy
I've received no help from above
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wow, there's no words to describe this excellent poem you have written above. my favorite lines was Now that you've listened to what I said I shall now join the dead and I'm a man treated like a boy I have no life and no love I am filled with no joy I've received no help from above beautiful, keep up the excellent work man.
Sadly this is a life reality, all of us will be put down and feel lonely at some point in our lives, I have also written a few short pieces mentioning this theme and once, I wrote quite a deep analysis of suicide in a poem decades ago, as a state of mind focus; it is called 'State Of Twentieth Century Man' if anyone is interested. Suicide is an important theme. Take care and best wishes.