Thursday, September 13, 2007

Suicide Note Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fish flying high
in the breast catches its death,
breath falls
from the ladder of
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Val Morehouse
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Patti Masterman 07 July 2009

I like this a lot. I like the ending, attempting to connect touch with thought. It's got some memorable lines too. I think it's wonderful writing.

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