Friday, December 22, 2006

Suicide Dreamer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frozen cold, Forever still,

and lost from time and light,
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buried alive
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K J 05 June 2011

Well written, but I think there is more to it, than what has been penned down. I beleive you could have added a lot more color to it. But neverthless, it is your choice, but it is definitely it is a short burst of pure agony from the depths of your soul.

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