Suicide Comments

great poem, sends a srtong message of giving up and helplessness. sounds almost like it could be a song, or like maybe a music video with narration in the background....ANYWAYS good job! !

Great repetition and interesting content, the poem seems as if written at razor blade point.

It seems as if eveyday, suicide grows closer to our minds. As if it grows like a disease spreading to our lungs then our hearts, our minds then our souls. If only there was a way out. But it seems as if nothing will ever drag us out of this hole called suicide

i thought this is wat the world is exactly like so i mean it rings home u know i have been there