Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Suicide Comments

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Suicide your cold, gnarled finger has touched me
Suicide you tried to blacken my heart
Your icy chill driven deep into my soul
Nuclear like, tore my world apart
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Rosalita Fernandez 09 May 2009

i bet a difficult write if this is true, well done for writing so truthfully

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

u have explained it finely and very well.. suicides are so sad yet u brought out the emotions that are there..spectacular write

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Catrina Heart 04 February 2009

You have painted the page with suicidal descriptions...So true yet hurting...especially when you hide your true feelings...10

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Colin Bingham

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