Suicide Comments
If I should ever say I might commit suicide
Then take me to a shrink
Straight away.
For I will have done a mental U-turn,
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Brilliantly expressed. About some things, it seems we think alike. I admire your poem for it's clarity and natural progression. It uses idioms, cliché, and original poetic thoughts and phrases- -all seamlessly blended into an interesting and thought-provoking poem.
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8/3/2025 4:21:06 AM # 1.0.0
Thanks Brian for your swift and thorough response. Yes I do hope to provoke some positive thinking about life.