Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Suicide Comments

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S is for silence, which i need in my head
U is for understand, i'd rather be dead
I is for indecicive of what i believe
C is for crying, unable to breathe
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Hannah Cooper
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Daniel David 07 July 2012

This is strong Hannah.... not an easy read... but if you are reflecting on life through your poems, it is not always easy. The last line rings true - when one has thought of suicide one can never be the same.

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Saadat Tahir 20 June 2012

easy mate...you sound like....'sail' by AWOL just as dark and palisaded with negative vibes but grips you like a punch to the solar...strong tc

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