Friday, March 2, 2012

Suicide Comments

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What can end this torment?
Encompassed by sadness and depression
The girl of my dreams, that's it
She is with me now, all is well
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Thomas Fontenot
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Captain Cur 17 May 2012

Tough write, perhaps about men who believe material advancement will bring happiness! Not! Happiness comes from within, and giving without! Enjoyed the poem, though dark!

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Neela Nath Das 05 March 2012

No negation, no despondency. If there is only happiness, life will be dull and monotonous.Let's enjoy life with delight and despair, light and darkness.Negative and positive can only be the source of energy.Nice diction.

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