Suicide. Comments

I am confused as to what poetic value is upheld by the poem?

If all you in the comment are going to act this way you should all kill yourself you should be ashamed

What a wonderful poem & a beautiful write!

To first time I read this first place member poem. Lisa you definitely have a way of releasing your tension. It is dramatic and at the same time light and airy.

Lady lazarus be reborn again.

Suicide is a topic that should never been taken lightly. It may convey the depressed state of mind at a particular point.The new morn may begin with new light. And those who comment should be careful whether we are right by writing hurtful comments and what message we convey to others.

This heart-wrenching poem is a desperate cry for help. I am deeply moved by some of the very empathic comments. Others that encourage people to commit suicide are a total disgrace to this wonderful site. I pray that PH will think twice about posting such future comments!

It's not a desirable mindset, but there are people who think suicide is an escape from sufferings and hardships of life. No, they need counselling. However, your poem does have a unique rhythm of anxiety in the short lines.

You are a very great poet, Please continute to write, I am surprised by your ideas, As you are helping depressed souls, To share and come out of suicide-disease!

I am sure you are a marvelous poetess,

Dear Lisa, You are a valuable human being and your life can become worth the living and you are able to improve your poetry. You did the right thing by letting us know about your circumstances and right now I am praying for Jesus Christ to contact you personally right away! ! 1

Nah, keep on writing and find something else to say.

blow the breath by thyself and live here in self satisfactory pelf

Reflection of a sad, sick moment that heals with care. Take care.

TODAY ranked as number One in the list of Best Poems of Member Poets. CONGRATULAIONS, dear Poetess!

This poem is ranked #3 in the 100 Best Poems of Members as of today. Congratulations, dear poet.

Marvellous poem. Totally emotionally charged. Captivating. The repetition of certain words and phrases throws the emotional vulnerability of the protagonist effectively. Well done, dear poet.

This is Beautiful. I understand the struggle, and this just touched my heart [3

This is a really deep poem, your an amazing writter.....

this is how im feeling right now nothing seems to go right for me.