Saturday, January 17, 2009

Suicide Comments

Rating: 5.0

What brings me to my last breath,
Whats going to be my choice to end it all,
Depression and Lies,
Broken into pieces too many times,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2010

What brings me to my last breath, Whats going to be my choice to end it all, Depression and Lies, Broken into pieces too many times, Haha this is my last goodbye, ...defeatist tendancies ofhuman beings....it is not to be the last choice....lovely and soul searching........10 read mine...humble submission....go back...pulled fromdeepsleep

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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

A strong poignant composition written in different grace with a stunning flow of words... Poetically penned in free verse form, with such great energy...10... A fowl in a black shawl...pls read.thx

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