Monday, November 10, 2008

Suicide Comments

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The marks you left inside of me,
those cannot be seen.

These marks, though,
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Keith Hendrickson 05 January 2009

powerful piece. i loved this one. you should check out ' 2 faces in my mirror' and 'waiting for a friend' i can relate a little. keep up the good work

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 23 December 2008

never surrender! keep on going! keep writing! Dear, friend. Would you like to read and comment on my newest poems, Lost Forest's Ancient Chant, Terrace of Violence, Hymn to Star, Hymn to Sun, Cascades of Caprices, Fountain of Fearless Fiance, Valley of Heart, Mata Hari etc. please? Thank you very much.

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John Dohoney 10 November 2008

the wrong answer for an unsolvable problem, only time heals those cuts

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Billy Joe Collins 10 November 2008

well said and good for you, broken hearts can mend but you only have one life. we can't give up life for love

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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2008

We can all hit the bottom - it's getting up that counts

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