Suicide Comments

this is amazing. i love it. and herbert, i doubt this is jus a morbid fascination with suicide, no one can write something like this without feeling it. and people who are suicidal dont like to talk bout it...great work Derek

I wonder what it is with you, this morbid fascination with suicide. Forgive me if I misread you and it is just poetry. It sounds quite real though (maybe just very good poetry?) I noticed you placed 'i' twice in the last line of the first stanza. If that is not intentional then it most certainly has a profound meaning. Think about it. And if you do want to talk about things (I am much more easy-going than it appears) , why don't you send something to my INBOX. Rumours have it that the afterlife does exist. But why do you think the Pope is so reluctant to go there? H