* Suicide * Comments

wow. i like the way you choose your words here. it's really meaning full!

love it... so great poem.. well expressed...

deep and great expression of feeling, i don't like grey or dark feeling but i love it! ! !

A wonderful write............full of metaphors...........

Beautiful and vague spectacle of a spirit and feeling no pain in the horizons of emotions.Good Job! ! ! !

It is in small tell tale signs We miss the silent cry You bring out the tragedy In such a touching way I couldn't help but weep For the ones I couldn't help. Such beautiful sketches Strong lines full of pity No wonder you are The king of the mountain. Angel

that was lovely to read, well done

i enjoyed this poem. I hope that you can read my poems and give me pointers, there are a few filler poems that are more or less just space taken up, but i feel like a few are really good... courage, the white wall, the weathermen, and the old watchtower are prolly the ones i feel most satisifed with

HEY, MR. GENIUS, WORD-PLACER-IMAGE-MAKER, THIS IS ANOTHER EASY WRITE FOR YOU, NO DOUBT, BUT A TRUE PICTURE OF COMPLEXITY AND BEAUTY FOR THIS READER. GOT CHILLS. WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GO ON A WORLD TOUR SO THAT YOUR QUAKING/SHAKING AFFICIANADOS CAN RUSH THE STAGE, TOUCH YOU, AND HAVE PEACE RESTORED WITHIN OUR BODY CELLS? CAROL

Ofcourse nice poem i like it Luwi

...wow...I'm in awe...lovely metaphors.

...stunning....really liked your way of expression....

Ur amazin...great metaphors hope to hear more of u! ! MHSR

The vacant chairs Wondered, why on earth The spill ever took place No one has attended to the beverage And that's suicide! believe it or not. many thanks, my friend, Sulaiman, your eyes don't need to make a u-turn on the pages of life. a 10 mark

From: Edward Cullen's luv 18 4ever (Lanexa United States; Female; 18) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 8/26/2009 1: 25: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: suicide true oh so true.

this is truly a well written poem. the way you expressed the situation was genius! you should write a book.

i love this poem. it is so beautifully written. i applaude you.

I read it for three times, and I thing it wasn't enough... what a poingnant poem, it really touched me.

i like the ending when it says martini my love needs a u-turn.. great write

Nothing was perfect When nothing went wrong The Martini was just another victim Of circumstances I like this part..true thing happens in life..neway you are really great! I'm just really new in this field so it took me quite a long time to understand your poem although i still dont thnk i rlly get it wholly..haha..but i'm trying to explore more..this is rlly new to me! xcting.huhu