Wednesday, July 9, 2008

Suicide Comments

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This is the end.
Today's the day,
I take my worthless life away.
I won't look back,
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Yami Tenshi
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Jesse Mejia 15 July 2008

haha wow, this sound a bit like a song if said correctly. very nice rhyme scheme very impressive.

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Shaun William Hayes 09 July 2008

One who feels so powerfully the negative influences will also, one day, feel all the love and light too. Don't waste your special gifts because others let you down. Hold fast and your time will surely come. Shaun.

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