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Sunday, May 31, 2009

Suicide. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM PLEASE

The blank and white ground
The peaceful feeling all-around.
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Danielle Vincenzi

suicide

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Jones Jones 10 June 2009

Hi Danielle; It looks great to me... flows well... scans well and the repetitive use of the word 'suicide' hits home the message... Only change I'd suggest would be to divide it into stanzas with suicide as the last word in each stanza... Great write!

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Shagun Khera 31 May 2009

why don; t u compose a music on this...this can become a song..

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