Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Suicidal Mind Comments

Rating: ★4.8

This world crumbles before me
the days turn dark and cold
something inside my soul
eating away my flesh
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Spiritwind Wood
Eating games haunted
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moon dust 26 November 2009

I certainly know these feelings.

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Patrick McFarland 30 September 2009

This is well written, but I got the sense you were holding back some of the rage and pain for the sake of structure. Just my opinion. Still, very well done.

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