If you were a shore rinsed by murmurous waves,
Mottled with mosaics of sharp stones and seaweed,
Meandering as the curly hair strand shone through by the Sun,
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Nice description of the ocean. Marine can signifies color, the deep blue of the navy bleu. In France, it can also be the first name of a girl. Mottled with mosaics of sharp stones and seaweed, I love this part. A great write! Keep on penning!
Thank you, Dave. I tried to leave a comment under your poem and vote - no success yet: / Perhaps too early, this is my first day here.
A great poem really liked it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Another Soldier Dies.
Thanks!