Suicidal Marine Comments

Thanks!

Nice description of the ocean. Marine can signifies color, the deep blue of the navy bleu. In France, it can also be the first name of a girl. Mottled with mosaics of sharp stones and seaweed, I love this part. A great write! Keep on penning!

Thank you, Dave. I tried to leave a comment under your poem and vote - no success yet: / Perhaps too early, this is my first day here.

A great poem really liked it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Another Soldier Dies.