Friday, August 1, 2008

Suicidal Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spanning the bridge between life and death
Deciding to take a final breath
Barrel in mouth
Trigger in hand
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Timothy Weiermann
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Trinidad Villafranca 09 January 2009

I <3 it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You left me speachless once again

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Tyease Collins 11 August 2008

Exactly how i feel. You caught the emotion definately in this poem. I love it <3 **Tess c.**

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Keith Foley 10 August 2008

So far just read this one poem and the Titles. Great potential. Love your titles. If you read only one poem (of mine) read 'One more kiss'.

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Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008

Hey Tim, ---hope this is only a figment of your imagination and nothing serious. Na no one is worth that much---your life is more precious remember that. We are all here and love you. Anyways great write (but hope only a fiction) . Keep writing. ++++10 to you

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Blessing Nanier 05 August 2008

woah, u are talented.that's all i cn really say. woah

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B. R. Hawkins 05 August 2008

Deep, profound words. Great work!

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~crazy/beautiful~ 02 August 2008

this is a very beautiful but short and simple poem.i, at one point in my life, felt this way.w/ 1 small difference 2 this poem.4 me i was w/out the comfort of him.keep it up

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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