Suicidal Like You, Dad. Comments

That was rather intense and vivid nice poem. almost sounds like it can be a rap at some parts.

oh god oh god i love this poem

I hope it doesn't sound like your life! ! In a way I was relating to my own, but yeah. Thanks!

that's so sad: (......wow....sounds like my life....sort of......nice work 10

glad you liked ittt! ! !

wow sad poem. visual picture on the way they were feeling. very nicely written.

Thanks. I tackled a sad rhyme. ♥ Anyway, thank God she didn't go suicidal, but she was changed.

this is well wrote i am srry that u have had to help someone deal with this situation