Suicidal Lies Comments

Well you wrote this poem, so I guess it wasn't the end. Thank God. I really feel the intensity, the unsteadiness, the pain in your poem. It really is quite good. But, more importantly, I could really feel it. I can tell your pain was real, and I'm really sorry about whatever drove you to that pain. I can relate with what you wrote, and I can understand depression. It's a main inspiration for my own writing. I don't know when you wrote this, but I hope things are better for you now.

deep and dark but a great poem keep it up!

this is good..keep it up

Very good piece of poetry, but I don't think it should be Suicidal Lies, but in fact Suicidal Truth...don't be afraid. Keep writing -suicide