Suicidal Lies Comments

This is a moving one, written with passion. Keep on posting and do not give up.

when you cry I smile, when you ask I retract, when you hug I am idle, the last stanza is poetically sad and true...that is what we are doing to other human being.... well done dear Kelvin Owusu..keep it up..

Congrats! Loved reading this poem.

The last stanza soars before leap fatal, insightful and intriguing.

............congratulations....I really like how you wrote this one....especially the second stanza....

So open, so raw and unknown. The thinking begins.. Thank You Kevin

Profound...lovely and congrats for the day selection

A beautiful poem, a well deserved selection of poem of the day.

Excellent the expression to illustrate the truth. Unique indeed.

Craftily created. A lovely piece. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.

The juxtaposition of ideas here is quite riveting. Go Ghana.

Nice poem. However this is subject to different interpretation by the raeders

Owusu, ur poem is just true, I like it. If u don't mine take a trip true my poems (the fluke, break up, faith ect)

Mindblowing...Superb poem.

the title already captivated me wow what a poem

Powerful and full of great depth

A guilty love of holding power over someone who has lost self worth. The attraction to someone that for some reason you feel ashamed of, (like a natzi over a Jew but not quite thet extreme) That is what I get from this interesting read.

This is one piece which I need to reread to get the gist of the whole thing. I am going out and I will reread this when I come back. Take care. You are really productive with three entries at one time. Great creations.

Sad poem but I like it.