Suicidal Dreams Comments

An intense circle of emotions, poignant, intense and falling, unable to get back up! The vicious cycle of suicide, it tries to never be defeated, but when it is you are the winner! ! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

My favorite lines/stanzas in this poem. It was very deep && I really like your way with words :) Nice Throw your heart against the ground and you can feel it, Take your ear to the drum and I guarantee you hear it, Your heart gains momentum, your mind becomes a thief, Pain is always a choice; times you are face to face. Suddenly struck down, running as you are in a race, To be the one to cross the finish line first. When pain is declared the winner, you trail behind its dirt,