Suicidal Comments

too dark for someone of ur age..anyway poem is great..

Subtle hints to those numbed emotions and sensitivities. I like that. It reads itself slowly and calmy because of it's observational placement; another hint at being detached from feelings. It also teams with the post-death-thought to create a sense of surrealism. So it's written well, and doesn't go flowery. And it's strong, almost unaware at the start but comes to thinking nearer the end. Then it literally does leave more questions than answers. Good poem then. It's an intriguing slant on suicide.

Death seems to be so easy but when you look at it in someone who cares about you perspective then things get really bad I have felt like taking my life when times are hard but I look to the ones who would miss me and stop. This shows that you see the meaning how others would feel thats strength to not go through it. This is a really good poem and you should really keep this up.

ooh so amazing....i didnt get any words to explain how it is...! ! the theme was excellent...10